hi James, the print on the far right looks very promising-strong sense of structure, good interplay of shape and tone,good balance of detail and solids. The colour pairing has a strong period feel to it and I would see this as a positive factor. I wonder if this would work on off-white paper(or a subtle tone of grey or blue) as the white shapes are very dominant visually and are pulling focus away from the main content of the image.A fussy comment would be that the print is patchy but given that you may be working with basic facilities you may be able to patch in the broken print textures using digital processes. Overall I would judge this to be a successful image with many strong qualities.Well done! All the best Jo
hi James,
ReplyDeletethe print on the far right looks very promising-strong sense of structure, good interplay of shape and tone,good balance of detail and solids. The colour pairing has a strong period feel to it and I would see this as a positive factor. I wonder if this would work on off-white paper(or a subtle tone of grey or blue) as the white shapes are very dominant visually and are pulling focus away from the main content of the image.A fussy comment would be that the print is patchy but given that you may be working with basic facilities you may be able to patch in the broken print textures using digital processes. Overall I would judge this to be a successful image with many strong qualities.Well done!
All the best Jo